Through
experience, I have learned that one of the most important things
about your story is your protagonist. You can have a great plot-line,
a great love interest, a supremely evil antagonist, and a super epic
battle scene, but if you don't create yourself a good protagonist, it
is all for naught.
In my opinion,
a protagonist should have a good structure, a
goal they're reaching
towards, a personality,
and a motive. Without
these things, your protagonist is mud.
Consider
your story – the protagonists to nearly all the stories I've read
have a goal and a motive. In Harry Potter,
Harry's main goal is to defeat Voldemort, and his motive is saving
the Wizarding world and muggle world alike. In the How to
Train Your Dragon books,
Hiccup's main goal is to bring peace to the archipelago, and his
motive for doing so is to stop slavery, slaughter, and death. If you
look back and realize your main character has no goal and no motives,
take a moment and reconsider.
Secondly,
the structure of your protagonist is absolutely crucial – is your
protagonist kind, or arrogant? Is your protagonist selfless, or
prideful? A good foundation for your main character is always a good
place to begin – make sure you know what personality your character
has, and then, allow your readers to see it as well.
Protagonists
are what really drive a story. If you can't create a protagonist with
goals or motives or structure, you may disappoint your readers. Your
protagonists are a crucial point – after all, it is
their journey your readers will be seeing.
Thirdly:
give your protagonist a personality. Give them a trait that your
readers will remember – you can give them a sense of humor, make
them sarcastic, stubborn, kind, selfless – those are only a few of
the many traits your main character can have. Start by giving your
protagonist a trait your readers will remember as positive.
And
now comes another crucial point: give your protagonist a trait the
readers will remember negatively.
If your protagonist is human, they will make mistakes. They will be
angry; they will act rashly; they will feel emotion; they will feel
fear. A protagonist without mistakes is nothing short of a flawless
Prince Charming who slays a dragon without any danger to himself to
save the dazzling princess. Give your protagonists a negative trait –
maybe they're short of patience. Maybe they're quick to anger. Maybe
they're too sarcastic;
too stubborn.
Give
them a trait that makes them human, but
NEVER one that makes
your readers want to stop reading, such as child abuse or likewise.
Make your protagonists likable, but at the same time, give them a
flaw – it makes them more human, and it kindles a reader's
interest.
The
only exception to not giving your protagonist a personality is if you
are doing it on purpose.
If you have a stoic, seemingly emotionless protagonist on purpose,
it's perfectly fine. Just make sure you aren't doing it on accident.
Your
protagonists are the ones your readers are going to be seeing the
most of. Your protagonist is driving the bandwagon; your readers are
simply on-board for the ride. But if your protagonist has bad
motives, no structure, no personality, no human traits, and no goal,
your readers might hop off.
-Beyond

